DRAFTS FOR FILM

This is my first draft of my thriller film where we were on our first trip to the college to start editing, it is the shortest of our draft as we were very inexperienced and didnt know how to do a lot of the editing techniques, seeing as ollie a boy in my group has done lots of editing before we let him take the raines and let him give it his best shot to give our opening sequence a start.

this is our second draft and even after one masterclass on editing there was a massive improvement in the techniques and we created a pretty much complete opening sequence which only needed a few tweeks, we mainly focused on getting over the two minuet time that we had to meet and once we had done this our main focus was on making the finishing touches to the film.

the main thing we were planning on changing was adding a security camera shot with a high angle, this was the highl;ight of our filming and editing as we were the only people to think of an idea that complex and once it payed off we felt like our movie had an advantage over the rest, here is a photo of thisn security cmaera shot.